The Spider Queen was beautiful.
She wore the shape of a human with glowing purple-blue eyes and a long, lean
body that amplified the polish of her perfect curves. In her hand was a thin shortsword
that curved slightly at the tip, its hilt and grip were small and capped by an hourglass
shaped, red ruby that was held in place by a silver lattice of spider’s web. The
sword whistled through the air in her deft hand. She danced with it. She was
graceful, and practiced, and darkly elegant, but about to die.
I ran out of the swirling gray
shadows that I had casted around myself and surged forwards towards her back.
The ground was littered with the dead husks of a dozen black widow spiders the
size of dogs. I moved between and jumped over them, careful to not make a sound
in my haste.
The Queen was focused on Anten,
whipping and slashing her sword back at forth at him. He was struggling to keep
up with the flurry of her blows and was visibly tiring. She had him on the
ropes and with a shrill scream, she swung her sword down hard towards his head
and he faltered, stumbled back, and fell to his bottom. The Queen moved forward
and stood above him triumphantly, raising her sword for the kill.
My dagger slid into her form like
butter and it didn’t stop until the entire blade was buried in her back. She
screamed, in horror this time, and I brought my left hand around and jammed my
second dagger into her neck. It crippled her and she fell limply to the ground
in front of me. I was breathing hard, not fully aware that I had ended the
fight. I reached down and pulled out my daggers and stood to look at my party
in the remnants of shock.
I had met them yesterday in Carvil.
They had been sent by the mayor to investigate the recent killings on the road
just outside of town where they discovered this lair. They decided they needed
some reinforcements and offered me two gold pieces a day to help them clear whatever
danger we found in the cave. I jumped at the chance to help them. Well, not
exactly because I wanted to help them; I jumped at the prospect of food money
for the next week.
In the cave, we found the Spider
Queen and her many eight-legged minions. Our progress was slow and we took
damage at every turn. The fight with the queen had left the party wholly beaten
and scarred, except for me. I had managed to stick to the shadows, picking my
attacks with care and optimizing my movements. Now that the fight was over, I
saw that I fared much better than the rest of my team.
Anten hadn’t gotten up from where
the Queen knocked him down, but he was moving and struggling to right himself.
Jade was holding her left arm close to her body with her sword hand. She had
been bitten by a spider and by the pale look in her eyes; I knew the poison was
starting to take effect. She needed help. But the help we had brought was now a
lifeless human form wrapped in webbing on the other side of the room.
“You guys okay?” I asked.
“I’ve been better.” Anten said as
he pushed himself into a sitting position. Jade nodded her head and went to
stand next to him.
I knelt down beside the Spider
Queen and picked up her sword. It was beautiful, just like her, and while her
body was now a cold and dead beauty, the sword was alive with it. It captured
the dim light of the room making the blade shine and the hourglass ruby was brilliant.
Jade helped Anten to his feet and
they walked over to me.
“Here, let me see it.” Anten said
as he reached his hand out. I reluctantly gave it to him. He gripped it in his
large hands, practically palming the entire hilt to get a grip on it. He examined
the blade and nodded.
“Well this is far too small for me. I like my swords big
and hefty, like Baldor the Firm here.” He gestured towards the giant great
sword at his hip. “And you, rogue, use daggers, right? I think the only one of
us who would actually get any use out of this would be you, Jade.”
“I want it!” I blurted out as he
started to hand it over to her. They both looked at me incredulously.
“It’s not a dagger.” Jade said. The
malice in her eyes was chilling.
“I know, but I could still use
it. It’s not that hard to duel wield a dagger and a sword.”
Anten’s stare was hard as he
looked me over, thinking. I wanted that sword. I had been the one to kill the
Queen, to get that final blow, and oh, how it would solve all my problems. I
could get any adventuring job I wanted. The prestige of walking down the stalls
at the market with this sword on my hip would be more than enough to send the
quest givers searching me out, instead of the other way around. I wouldn’t have
to beg at their feet and plead for the job and the scraps of coins they offered.
I dearly needed the money, and at the very least, I could sell it for quite a
sum if I found using the much longer sword unwieldy and noticed that it affected
my performance. Anten’s decision knocked me from my thoughts: “No, this is
rightfully hers.” And he handed the Spider Queen’s sword over to Jade’s willing
hands. She smiled and swung it a few times before sheathing it to her belt.
My stomach sank.
Anten bent down and searched the
Queen’s body for any other loot and as he stood up, he tossed me the two gold
pieces he had promised for the job.
“You did good.” He said. My eyes
were hard. I wanted that sword and losing it was not sitting well in my mind.
Two gold pieces; that was all I had to show for this hard work. It wasn’t
enough. “We’d be mighty pleased if you’d join us on whatever our next mission
is, if that’d be alright with you?” He turned to the webbed man when he saw I
wasn’t going to give him an answer. “Damn it, Hallix. We’ll go get you some help
and be right back. Just sit still, okay?” The web didn’t answer either.
They turned to leave and the
sickness in my stomach turned to fire. Of course they wouldn’t give the sword
to the new guy on his first adventure. It was so typical. And Jade barely even
used her sword against the Spider Queen. She was shooting arrows at the
dog-spiders the whole time, while Anten and I fought the boss. I wanted that
sword.
With the decision made, I cloaked
myself in the gray-black shadows and rushed forwards to join the party, and
jammed my daggers, one for each of them, into their backs. Anten cried in pain,
but I must have hit something vitally important in Jade, she fell to the ground
with a simple “Uhnff.”
“What the hell, man?” Anten shouted
from the floor beside Jade. “You backstabbing bitch!”
I bent down beside Jade and
pulled the Spider Queen’s glorious blade from her belt. “I wanted the sword.
You should have listened.” He responded with a number of expletives and I
wouldn’t have expected any less from him.
I reached into my pocket and
grabbed the two gold coins he had given me with the intent of throwing them
back in his face, but when I looked at them, I put them back in my pocket. I
needed the money after all, and it wouldn’t do him any good while he died down
here in this cave.
The sword felt perfect in my hand
and I turned my back on the screaming warrior dying on the ground behind me.
"B is for Backstab"
Jason! You had me caught up in this story right away with your descriptions and the action. "The sword whistled through the air in her deft hand. She danced with it. She was graceful, and practiced, and darkly elegant, but about to die."
ReplyDeleteI wondered what Jade had done so that Anten would say that the sword was "rightfully" hers. I want to know more about the main character of this story; I am interested in what happens to him (or her) next. Good job. xoA
Wow! Awesome story Jason. You have a wonderful way of weaving the story and then hitting the reader with a surprise ending.
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy you've joined the A-Z Challenge. I'm enjoying your stories and look forward to more.
What a cool story. I really liked it. I felt drawn from the beginning. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy the story. You do a great job engaging the reader and constructing vivid scenes for your characters. I look forward to reading more of this.
ReplyDeleteSpiders are my personal nemesis...so this totally got to me from the start. I did like the betrayal at the end, the cold practicality of it all. Again, you have a way with the action scenes. Very nice. One question...the narrator...male or female? I was thinking male at the start but female at the end.
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